Question

书面表达(满分25分))
为了丰富同学们的课余生活，缅怀革命先烈，你校决定举办＂红五月歌咏比赛＂，请你以学生会的名义写一份书面通知．有关内容如下：
1.以班级为单位;
2.以革命歌曲为主;
3.报名时间为4月10前.
4.举办时间为4月28日下午于学校礼堂．
注意：书面通知应写成一篇连贯的短文，可以适当增加情节，词数为120左右，注意通知的格式。
                                                                                  

Answer 1

Dear students,
With the purpose of enriching our school life and recalling revolutionaries who devoted all their life to the cause of China's liberation, we'll have a singing competition for Red May on April 28th in the hall of our school .
All the classes should have a full preparation for it, and the songs will be mainly about the praises of the revolutionary. Besides ,we'll give rewards to the best singers and the classes .What’s more, some of our parents will be invited to the activity. Why not try your best and give them a big surprise?
We hope that all the classes take an active part in this activity and not to forget to sign up before April 10th.
Thank you!
Students’` Union
March 29th,2013

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。