Question

20．下面短文中共有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Jim，
So glad that you are interested in my new flat．Now I would like tell you something about it．Locating in the north of the city，this Residential Center is small with only six building．My flat，which covers the area of 36square meters，is in the fourth floor in Building 2．It consisted of a sitting room，a bedroom，a kitchen and a toilet．When you enter into the flat，you will find yourself in the sitting room．The sitting room is the part that I like best，because it is brightly with a lovely balcony，which I can enjoy the beautiful garden below．Although my flat is small，I like them very much because it is comfortable．
Best regards，
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 文章是一封写给朋友的信．介绍了自己新住所的基本情况，一室一厅，一厨一卫．房子不大，但作者非常喜欢．

解答 Dear Jim，
So glad that you are interested in my new flat．Now I would like∧tell you something about it．
                                                                                             加to
Locating in the north of the city，this Residential Center is small with only six building．
Located                                                                                                        buildings
My flat，which covers the area of 36square meters，is in the fourth floor in Building 2．
                                  an                                           on
It consisted of a sitting room，a bedroom，a kitchen and a toilet．
    consists
When you enter into the flat，you will find yourself in the sitting room．
                        去掉
The sitting room is the part that I like best，because it is brightly with a lovely balcony，
                                                                                    bright
which I can enjoy the beautiful garden below．
where
Although my flat is small，I like them very much because it is comfortable．
                                                   it
Best regards，
Yours，
Li Hua．
1．加to．短语搭配，would like to do想要做某事．
2．locating改为located．短语搭配，be located in坐落于，be动词省略了．
3．building改为buildings．前面有six，building大楼，可数名词，要用复数．
4．the改为an．短语搭配，an area of一片区域，一块面积，表示泛指．
5．in改为on．在楼上，用介词on．
6．consisted改为consists．时态错误，文章讲述的客观现实，要用一般现在时态．
7．into去掉．enter是及物动词，直接带宾语，不需要介词．
8．brightly改为bright．句中是作系动词的表语，要用形容词．
9．which改为where．题干是一个定语从句，从句主谓宾结构完整，要用关系副词．
10．them改为it．指代错误，句意指代的是my flat单数名词，要用it．

点评 短文改错题考查学生的语篇理解和语言运用能力．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数）；动词（时态，语态，搭配）；代词（不定代词，人称代词）；形容词和副词（转化）；连词（and，but，or）；冠词（an，a，the）等．解题时，要把握好句子结构，以动词为中心．动词和与动词有关的错误在短文改错中占很大的比例．