Question

13．假设你班最近举行了一次班会讨论怎样有效的提高英语听说能力．请你根据下表所提示的信 息，写一篇短文，谈谈你们的讨论结果并提出你的建议．

讨论结果	1、课堂上多行讨论、讲故事等形式的师生和学生交流；
	2、课外听说活动、演讲或晚会等；
	3、日常多用口语交流；
你的建议	（根据自己的经历与感想，提出两至三点建议）

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇"图表+提纲"作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一篇短文．介绍班级就"怎样使英语学习变成一件快乐的事"这一问题的讨论情况并提出自己的建议．
写作时人称以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
写作要点：1．介绍讨论情况； 2．建议；3．总结．
重要短语：the way to do （做某事的方法），first of all（首先），have interactive activities（有许多互动活动），such as（例如），have fun doing sth（做某事有乐趣），take part in （参加），communicate with…（与…交流），out-of-class activities（课外活动），need to do sth（需要做某事），join English clubs（参加英语俱乐部），make pen-friends（交笔友），on the Internet（在网络上），all in all（总之）．
【高分句型一】
1．Recently，we had a discussion on how to make learning English relaxing and fun．
此处是连接副词"how"引导的宾语从句，形式为"疑问词how+to do"，主句为"we had a discussion on"．
【高分句型二】
2．we need to find more opportunities to communicate in English with people，①whether they are English teachers or classmates，foreigners or Chinese，②because ③using English is the best way to learn．
①此处是连接词"whether"引导的让步状语从句，主句为"we need to find more opportunities to communicate in English with people"．
②此处是由连词"because"引导的原因状语从句．
     ③此处是由动名词短语"using English"作主语，谓语动词用单数．
【高分句型三】
3．All in all，what we need is more free time and more space．
此处是由疑问代词"what"引导的主语从句，"what"在主语从句中做动词"need"的宾语，谓语动词为"is"，句子作主语谓语动词用单数，表语为"more free time and more space"．

解答 Recently，we had a discussion on how to make learning English relaxing and fun．【高分句型一】Most students believe that there are many ways to do so．First of all，we can have more interactive activities in class，such as discussions，interviews，story-telling and role-play． In this way，we can have more fun learning English．（1．课上师生或生生互动） Secondly，we can take part in more out-of-class activities like English speech contests and English evenings．Through these activities we can improve our English skills in an easy and relaxing way．（2．课外活动：演讲或晚会等）Thirdly，we need to find more opportunities to communicate in English with people，whether they are English teachers or classmates，foreigners or Chinese，because using English is the best way to learn．【高分句型二】（3．日常运用英语：口头或书面交流）（讨论情况）
     These ideas sound reasonable and practical．From my experience，there are many other interesting and relaxing ways．For example，we can listen to English songs and watch English movies．We can also watch English programs on TV or join English clubs or make English pen-friends on the Internet．（建议）
All in all，what we need is more free time and more space．【高分句型三】（总结）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．