Question

书面表达（共1题，满分25分）

假如你是高二学生名叫王海。最近你发现班上部分同学每次遇到重要考试都会出现焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封信给某英文报编辑反映这个问题。信的内容包括：1 焦虑症状 2建议（至少三点）

注意：1根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐字翻译

2可适当增加细节使行文连贯

3词数100左右 ，开头已给出，不计入总数

参考词汇：头晕 dizzy 食欲不振：lose one’s appetite

Dear editor,

I’m Wang Hai, a student of Grade 2 in senior high school. I ‘m writing to tell you some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep and some will lose their appetite. In fact, all those symptoms have terrible effects on our exam and we are all eager to get rid of them.

First of all, in my opinion, it’s important for us to have a right attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams. Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exam, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是关于考试焦虑症的相关内容，与考生的生活非常贴近，考生有话可说，有很强的可行性。首先应该用合适的连接词把考试焦虑症的症状写清楚，在发表个人建议的时候，可以适当使用高级的句式和高级的词汇来给文章增色。在自己的个人建议中可以加入谚语，让文章更上一层楼。

【亮点说明】范文使用了很多词组：suffer from 遭受，lack of缺乏，be eager to 渴望，get rid of消除，getting along with相处， in my opinion在我看来, stay up熬夜，还使用了不少精典句式，如：Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. 这句话用了让步状语从句， it’s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. 这句话用了it做形式主语， there is no need to worry too much about the results.这句话用了固定句型， We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. 这句话用了省略句， (We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.) 这句话用了结果状语从句，还有文章还使用了First of all, Besides,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。

考点： 提纲类作文