Question

9．假如你是李华，一名刚刚进入高三的学生．2013年高考在即，面对压力，想和父母说说心里话，
请你用英文以书信的形式表达出来．内容要点如下：

知心话	对父母的感谢	倾注爱心，关心鼓励
	对父母的希望	1．和他们多交流，使自己保持良好状态
		2．创造条件，给自己提供实时帮助
学习打算	考生自拟（至少写两点）

注意：1．短文须包括所有内容要点．
     2．字数：120左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数．
Dear Mom and Dad，
        The annual College Entrance Examination is around the corner．On this special occasion，how
   I wish I could have a heart-to-heart talk with you．______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________　　　　　　　　　　Yours ever，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Meanwhile，it is my sincere hope that you can spare more time to communicate with me
高分句型二：
What's more，i will pay special attention to maths where I used to score low．
句型一 it is my sincere hope that you can spare more time to communicate with me． 该句中it位于句首作形式主语，真正的主语是that后面跟的从句，该从句为主语从句
句型二 where I used to score low 该句是一个where引导的定语从句，where在句中作关系副词
此外，该文章还有以下重要词汇：to begin with 首先    after all 毕竟   what's more  而且

解答 Dear Mom and Dad，
    The annual college entrance examination is around the corner．On this special occasion，how I wish I could have a heart-to-heart talk with you．
   To begin with，I am grateful to all the love，care and encouragement you have given me all these years．（感谢父母）Meanwhile，it is my sincere hope that you can spare more time to communicate with me．（高分句型一）In this way，I can always be in a good state in the coming year．Besides，I also hope that you can create necessary conditions，thus providing me with timely help．
   For my part，I am determined to concentrate more time and energy on my study and，if any problem arises，turn to my teachers immediately．What's more，i will pay special attention to maths where I used to score low．（高分句型二）After all，a balanced development is essential in the college entrance examination．（自我打算）
                                                                                                              Yours ever，
                                                                                                              Li Hua．

点评 本文是一个图标类书面表达，写作时应注意观察图表所提供的信息，尽量要将其所列内容清楚表达；另外考生平时应注意积累相应的词汇，用准确的、简介的语言将作文表达清楚．