写作（共两节，满分35分） 第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正： 该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Jin Jing，
Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all，believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack of self-confidence．You should smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate，and you can also talk about your hobbies. Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly．
【小题1】is后面加a
【小题2】advices改为advice
【小题3】in改为of
【小题4】去掉of
【小题5】loud改为louder
【小题6】him改为them
【小题7】trying改为try
【小题8】share改为shares
【小题9】unless改为if
【小题10】possibly改为possible
解析试题分析：
【小题1】is后面加a 后面的名词one是一个可数名词，使用冠词a修饰。
【小题2】advices改为advice 名词advice是不可数名词，没有复数形式。
【小题3】in改为of 固定搭配first of all最重要的；
【小题4】去掉of 动词lack是及物动词，后面直接加宾语，不需要介词。
【小题5】loud改为louder 根据后面的than说明使用比较级的形式。
【小题6】him改为them 这里的them是指上句的classmates。
【小题7】trying改为try 本句是一个祈使句，所以使用动词原形构成。
【小题8】share改为shares 本句的定语从句的先行词是a student，是单数形式，故share也使用单数。
【小题9】unless改为if 句意：如果有人遇见麻烦，你应该乐于帮助别人。所以if表示条件，不需要使用unless（如果…不…）
【小题10】possibly改为possible 本句中使用副词possibly作为状语修饰动词短语make as many friends as possible.
考点：考查学生对词汇语法的掌握情况
点评：答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考查的就是我们的基础知识。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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Dear Sally,
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[1]some popular expressions are a raystery. No one is sure how they developed. One of these is the expression “carry a chip on your shoulder”. A person with a chip on his shoulder is a problem for anybody who must deal with him. He seems to be expecting trouble.
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_______________________________________________________________________________ 78．Fill in the blank in Paragraph? With proper words. (no more than 10 words)
_______________________________________________________________________________ 79．Chip can be used on the occasions when people (no more than 20 words)
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77．Which sentence in the passage can be replaced by the following one?
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你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况:
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时间: 上周末 对象: 眼科医生（eye-doctor）王教授 主题: 我国中小学生近视（short-sightedness）问题 基本信息: （1）发生率: 略高于50％ （2）人数: 世界第一 专家解读: （1）原因: 很复杂 （2）治疗: 没有哪一种药物能治愈近视 （3）建议: 不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动 （4）特别提示: 如何握笔也和近视有关 |
[写作内容]
根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，并包括如下内容:
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[写作要求]
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[评分标准]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
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