Question

【题目】请阅读下面有关学生自理能力的漫画及相关文字，并按要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

Many students rely too much on their parents about daily issues.

(Friday afternoon. On the phone.)

Son: Mum?

Mother: Yes?

Son: All of my socks are dirty. What shall I do?

Mother: No worry! I’ll help you this weekend.

Son: ...

【写作内容】

1.用约30词概括漫画的主要内容；

2.分析学生自理能力差的原因，并谈谈你的看法（上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点)；

3.谈谈如何增强学生的自理能力。

【写作要求】

1.可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】As is vividly shown in the picture, a delivery containing dirty clothes is sent to a mother from her son, which reveals students’ poor ability to take care of themselves. (30 words)

Personally, these students, along with their parents, should take the blame for their inability to attend to themselves. For one thing, some students take everything in their life for granted, thinking it’s their parents’ duty to feed them, clothe them and even clean their messes. That is why they don’t bother to learn some basic living skills. For another, the indulgence of parents encourages the laziness of these students. Some parents even go to extremes to mirco-control every little detail of their children. They somewhat discourage their children from trying to live their life independently.

Therefore, to help them become independent and capable, parents should loose control on their children, while children should learn to take more responsibilities for themselves. (120 words)

【解析】试题分析：

本文要求根据漫画和文字内容写一篇关于一些学生自理能力差的文章。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：第一部分：介绍漫画内容（注意词数限制在30个单词之内）；第二段：分析学生自理能力差的原因，并谈谈你的看法（用personally, for one thing，for another ，therefore等使这部分流畅，注意这部分的两方面内容：分析原因，谈谈自己的看法）；第三段：如何增强学生的自理能力（父母和孩子双方面努力）。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：定语从句的使用As is vividly shown in the picture, a delivery containing dirty clothes is sent to a mother from her son, which reveals students’ poor ability to take care of themselves.；现在分词作伴随状语For one thing, some students take everything in their life for granted, thinking it’s their parents’ duty to feed them, clothe them and even clean their messes.；表语从句的使用That is why they don’t bother to learn some basic living skills.等等。2.使用了过渡词语：Personally, For one thing，For another等。3.使用了重要短语：along with 以及；take…for granted认为…理所当然；take responsibilities负责，承担责任。