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短文写作（共1题，满分25分）
请先阅读下面的电子邮件：
Dear Li Hua,
I feel very happy to read your e – mail said really appreciate your English, Congratulations to you. Your English has really imposed a lot.
Oh, I have some good news to tell you. I’ve got a good chance to practice my Chinese as an exchange student to China. So, here I’d like to ask you for help – which school is the best one for me to attend in China. Tell me, and then I can tell my school to make contact with it.
Looking forward to your early reply and hope to meet you in China soon.
Yours friendly,
Mary
假设你是李华，请你根据下列要点，用英文给玛丽回一封电子邮件，建议她来你所在的学校。理由是：
1．你校每年都接纳交换生；
2．学校条件好，各种设施好，有图书馆，电子阅览室……；
3．课外活动丰富多彩；
4．你校学生英语水平好，易于交流；
5．特别是老师好，教法生动有趣
注意：
1．可根据要求加以必要发挥，但不要逐字翻译；
2．词数为120左右；
3．电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入你所写词数），但不得抄入答题卡。
参考词汇：设施：facility  电子阅览室：electro – reading – room
Hi Mary.
Nice to read your e – mail today. It’s very kind of you to give me encouragement, l owe a lot to you for your help.
As to which school is the best one for you to stay in, I should recommend                
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
Isn’t the intonation above enough for you to make a decision? If you come to my school, I think I can serve as a good link between you and other students as well as the teachers.
Hope you’ll like my school.
Li Hua

Answer 1

Hi Mary,                                                                     
Nice to read your e-mail today. It’s very kind of you to give me encouragement; I owe a lot to you for your help.                                                                  
As to which school is the best one for you to stay in, I should recommend my school. The following are the reasons.
First, exchange students are welcomed in my school; besides, we have first-class facilities: the labs, modern libraries and electro-reading-rooms are accessible to all our students, offering us places to broaden our views while on the sports grounds and in gymnasiums we surely can get much fun and make many friends. After-class we have varies of activities which provide us with opportunities to improve ourselves.
And the most important is that we have the best teachers as well as the best schoolmates. The teachers are kind and ready to offer help. In their unique ways of teaching, they often make their class lively and interesting. We students are encouraged to speak English both in and out of class, thus I do believe that you won’t have any difficulty in communicating with us.
Isn’t the information above enough for you to make a decision? If you come to my school, I think I can serve as a good link between you and other students as well as the teachers.           
Hope you’ll like my school                                                                      
Li Hua

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