Question

假设你是李越。你校和澳大利亚的Forest中学是姊妹学校。最近Forest中学网站邀请你推荐一位你校的环保大使(Environmental Protection Ambassador)。请你根据下面的提示用英语给该网站写一封100—120个词的Email。内容包括：

基本情况	Lily, 女，18岁，就读于高三（1）班
兴趣爱好	爱好体育，听音乐，上网
性格志向	开朗活泼，热心公益事业
社团任职	校学生会主席
推荐理由	… …

注意：Email的抬头、落款及第一句已给出（不计词数）。
参考词汇: 公益事业 public service
editor,
I would like to recommend one of my classmates as Environmental Protection Ambassador.     
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Yours faithfully,
Li Yue

Answer 1

Dear editor,
I would like to recommend one of my classmates as Environmental Protection Ambassador. Her name is Lily and she is now 18, studying in Class 1, Grade 3.
Apart from sports, she likes listening to music and surfing the Internet. As the leader of our school’s Students’ Union, Lily is so active and open-minded that she often devotes herself to public service. All the time she is trying to call on all the people to protect the environment and not to use plastic bags at school and out of school. Last year, she took part in the national competition on environment protection, in which she got the gold prize.
I think what she has been doing is worth praising and following. I’ll be very happy if you could accept my recommendation.
Yours faithfully,

试题分析：这是一篇应用文写作，写一封电子邮件。文章的要点基本上都给了出来，考生只需要翻译清楚即可，难度不大。在写作的时候也不能逐字逐句的翻译，要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，形成一个整体。选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。写作中注意应用一些比较经典的句式短语等来提高作文的文采，注意不要遗漏要点。为了使表达更有逻辑性，适当使用序数词，连接词等。
点评：此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。