Question

假如你是李华，Tracy 即将结束你们学校作为交换生的学习生活并返回英国。请你根据以下内容用英语写一篇欢送词。

1.       赞扬她的善良友好；

2.       怀念与她相处的快乐时光；

3.       感谢她对大家英语学习的帮助；

4.       希望她有机会再来中国。

注意：1.词数不少于100词；      2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear teachers and friends, I’d like to say something before Tracy goes back to England.

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That’s all. Thank you.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear teachers and friends, I’d like to say something before Tracy goes back to England.

On one hand, Tracy is such a kind and friendly girl that I feel happy to be her friend. Because of her good character she is very popular with us during her stay here. On the other hand, she gets along well with everyone and all of us have a wonderful time with her. How can we forget the time that we spent together happily! I remember she doesn’t hesitate to help us whenever we have trouble in learning English. Therefore, we are grateful to Tracy from the bottom of our heart and we owe a lot of thanks to her.

True friendship never ends, so I hope we can keep in touch with Tracy. I also hope that Tracy can come back to China and stay with us in the near future.

【解析】

试题分析：提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。