Question

10．假如你叫李华，你的英国网友Jack来信说他要来中国旅游．请你根据下列要求给Jack写一封回信．
1、欢迎Jack来华，邀请他到家做客．
2、询问他是否可以到你的班级来做一个演讲，介绍英国文化．
3、给他提一点中国旅游方面的建议．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Jack，
      ．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文属于提纲类作文，根据文章所给的信息提示写一封邀请信．写作要点包括向Jack发出邀请，包含三个要点：邀请来家做客、到班级做场报告并给出在中国旅游的建议等．写作时态为一般现在时，人称用第一人称和第二人称．
重要短语：give sb some advice about doing sth给某人一些关于做某事的建议；pay a visit to sp．参观某地；make a speech about（做一场关于…的讲座/报告）；expect to do sth期待做某事；recommend doing sth推荐做某事；places of interest风景名胜；
高分句型：
1．My mother said that she would make our home-made dinner for you，which tastes very delicious．本句中包含一个that引导的宾语从句和一个which引导的非限制性定语从句．
2．I wonder if you can come to my class to make a speech about your English culture and customs because my classmates are expecting to see you and communicate with you in English．本句中有一个if引导的宾语从句和because引导的原因状语从句．

解答 Dear Jack，
I'm very glad to know that you are going to visit China during your summer holiday．Since China is a big country，I'd like to give you some advice about visiting China．I sincerely hope you can pay a visit to my home，where everyone of my family welcome you warmly．My mother said that she would make our home-made dinner for you，which tastes very delicious．（高分句型）I wonder if you can come to my class to make a speech about your English culture and customs because my classmates are expecting to see you and communicate with you in English．（高分句型）
 If you want to travel in our country，I recommend visiting many places of interest，such as Xi'an，Beijing，Guilin and so on，where there are many famous sites for you to visit．（提出建议）
I'm looking forward to your coming．（表达期望）
Yours，
Lihua

点评 对于书信类的书面表达不仅要在表达内容上，也要在书面形式上多下功夫．一定要注意单词拼写正确，书写规范，字迹工整，卷面力求整洁，正确使用标点符号，使别人看起来耳目一新，具有整体美感，并且要使用一些高级句式，主从复合句等来提高自己的作文档次．