Question

11．假设你是李华，在你校留学的意大利女孩Sara对端午节很感兴趣，计划端午节期间到宜昌旅游，了解宜昌的端午节文化．她写信向你咨询相关事宜．请根据以下提示，用英语给她回一封电子邮件．
内容包括：1．端午节的时间和起源；
2．主要的庆祝活动形式；
3．建议品尝粽子和观看龙舟赛．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出．
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
参考词汇：端午节Dragon Boat Festival；   粽子zongzi；
投江drown oneself in a river；   糯米glutinous rice
Dear Sara，
Knowing that you are interested in the Dragon Boat Festival in Yichang，
I am writing to tell you about it and give you some advice．
The Dragon Boat Festival，which falls on May 5that lunar calendar，is an important Chinese festival in memory of a great poet named Qu Yuan．It is said that Qu Yan committed suicide by drowning himself in the Miluo River．Knowing him to be a good man，local people rowed boats along the river in search of him（高分句型一）．They also threw rice into the river to feed the fish so that they would not eat Qu's body．That's why Chinese people celebrate the festival by eating Zongzi and holding dragon boat competitions．
Zongzi is a kind of dumpling made of glutinous rice with meat and eggs inside．The most famous Zongzi in Hainan are those made in Danzhou City and Ding'an County．I suggest you try some．I also recommend that you watch the grand dragon boat competition in Chengmai County（高分句型二）．It is one of the most exciting competitions across Hainan．You won't forget it．
Wish you a pleasant journey in Yichang．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等 
高分句型一：
Knowing him to be a good man，local people rowed boats along the river in search of him． 
因为了解他是一个很好的人，地方上的人划着船沿着河流寻找他． 
高分句型二：
I also recommend that you watch the grand dragon boat competition in Chengmai County． 
我也建议你在澄迈县观看盛大的龙舟比赛．

解答 Dear Sara，
       Knowing that your are interested in the Dragon Boat Festival in Hainan，I am writing to tell you about it and give you some advice． 
       The Dragon Boat Festival，which falls on May 5 th at lunar calendar，is an important Chinese festival in memory of a great poet named Qu Yuan．It is said that Qu Yan committed suicide by drowning himself in the Miluo River．Knowing him to be a good man，local people rowed boats along the river in search of him（高分句型一）．They also threw rice into the river to feed the fish so that they would not eat Qu's body．That's why Chinese people celebrate the festival by eating Zongzi and holding dragon boat competitions． 
       Zongzi is a kind of dumpling made of glutinous rice with meat and eggs inside．The most famous Zongzi in Hainan are those made in Danzhou City and Ding'an County．I suggest you try some．I also recommend that you watch the grand dragon boat competition in Chengmai County（高分句型二）．It is one of the most exciting competitions across Hainan．You won't forget it． 
       Wish you a pleasant journey around Hainan． 
                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．