Question

假定你是李华，就暑假游览北山公园时看到的一些情况给报社写一封信，对这些情况进行反映并提出建议。
内容包括：1、有些游客随意乱扔垃圾、乱写乱画；
2、有些古迹（the cultural sites）已遭到破坏；
3、你的建议；
注意： 1、词数：100左右;    
2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear editor,
I’m Li Hua, writing to tell you something about what I saw in the Bei Shan Park this summer and I became very worried.
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Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear editor,
I’m Li Hua, writing to tell you something about what I saw in the Bei Shan Park. I visited it this summer and I became very worried. Along the road some people threw paper and empty bottles everywhere, and others drew pictures or wrote their names on the old trees. How badly they damaged some of the cultural sites there.
As we all know there are so many visitors there everyday. If they don’t pay attention to their behaviors, the cultural sites will be destroyed. So I strongly suggest we encourage people to protect everything there. Maybe we can make a website about it or ask certain people to guard some of them. At the same time, the government should take some actions.
Yours,
Zhang Hua

试题分析：考查半开放性作文。本文属于半开放性作文，所给的话题是游客的随手扔垃圾的情况，给的要点不多，可以从个人建议方面展开，如加强本方面的教育，在旅游景点加强监管等等。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
点评：点评：半开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。