Question

简要描述图片内容, 结合生活实际, 就图片的主题

（A girl is learning how to ride a bike.）谈谈自己的感想。

Answer 1

There are four people in the picture. A girl is learning how to ride a bike. Her parents and her grandmother, being afraid that she might fall off the bike, are trying hard to support her. The mother is even carrying a first–aid box. But with them around her, the girl finds it very difficult to learn. So she tells them to let her ride it by herself.

In our real life, we can see something like that happening everywhere. Parents love their children too much. They take care of everything for them. They don’t want them to take any risks. However, by doing so, the parents actually hinder their children from growing up strong and healthy. Parents should know that trees can’t grow big and strong in a greenhouse.

解析:

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