Question

【题目】假设你是李华, 你的英国朋友Tom要来你校任教。为了方便，他打算在学校附近租房子，发来邮件向你咨询合适的房源。请你根据下表提供的信息回复邮件。

注意：1.词数不少于100。

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：公寓apartment

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I am writing to tell you that I’ve found an apartment which may meet your needs. It’s on the second floor, facing the south, with an area of 70 square meters. It has a bedroom and a sitting room, fully furnished. Located in Longwan Street, it offers convenient shopping and easy traffic. The apartment is in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood. And there is also a gym nearby where you can go and take exercise regularly. The rent is 4,500 yuan per month. If you are interested in it, please call 69512. If you need any more help, just let me know.

Looking forward to meeting you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假设你是李华, 你的英国朋友Tom要来你校任教。为了方便，他打算在学校附近租房子，发来邮件向你咨询合适的房源。请你根据下表提供的信息回复邮件。房子地点：龙湾大街。面积布局：2楼，一室，一厅，70平方米，朝南，家具齐全。环境交通：小区优美、安静；附近有体育馆可以健身；购物、交通便利。每月房租：4500元。联系电话：69512。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：meet your needs（满足你的需要）；facing the south（朝南）；offers convenient shopping and easy traffic（购物方便，交通便利）；等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。