Question

5．如何衡量一个人真正的品质，不同的人有不同的看法．请认真阅读下面的引语，结合图片所提示的信息，按要求用英语写一篇短文．
"The measure of a man's real character is what he would do if he knew he would never be found out．"
-Thomas Macaulay
  
内容要求：
1．你对该引语的理解；2．举例说明；3．恰当的结尾．
注意：
1．内容至少包括一幅图片信息；
2．文中不得出现考生的具体信息；
3．词数：120左右；短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：self-discipline n．自律；self-disciplined adj．自律的

This quotation from Thomas Macaulay tells us thatThis quotation from Thomas Macaulay tells us that it isself-discipline that reflects a man's real character．Therefore，we should beself-disciplined anytime even if we know that our behavior will never be foundout．
For example，when taking exams，we should be self-disciplined enough and not cheat．For another，it is essential for us tolearn to control ourselves well on the Internet．We can't be addicted to computer games or bad information，nor can we use theInternetto attack others immorally and illegally．In addition，through self-discipline weshould avoid and resist different kinds of temptations，which is of great help toprevent corruptions．
In conclusion，being self-disciplined not only helps us improve ourselves，but contributes to buildingup a harmonious and civilized society．As the saying goes，the day has eyes and the night has ears．We should make a reasonablechoice about what to do wherever and whenever we are．．

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"图片+提纲类"形式，根据文章图片和所给提示信息写一篇短文，阐述对一个人真正的品质理解．写作要点：1．对该引语的理解；2．举例说明；3．恰当的结尾．既是看图作文又是提纲类作文．
写作时时态以一般现在时为主．人称以第三人称为主．
重要短语：reflect sth （反映某物），even if（即使），control oneself （自控），be addicted to（上瘾），attack sb （攻击，袭击），in addition （除…之外还），resisttemptations（抵制诱惑），be of greathelp （有很多帮助），inconclusion（总之），contribute to（贡献），building upa society （构建和谐社会），make a choice（做出选择）．
【高分句型】

     1．This quotation from Thomas Macaulay tells us ①that it is self-discipline that reflects a man's real character ②．
 ①这里是由that引导的宾语从句，主句的主语是This quotation from Thomas Macaulay，谓语动词是 tells．
 ②这里是强调句型，其结构为"It is/was+强调部分+that…"．
2．nor can we use the Internet to attack others immorally and illegally．
这里是部分倒装，其结构为"否定词+一般疑问句形式"．
3．when taking exams，we should be self-disciplined enough and not cheat．

这里是时间状语从句的省略，由"连词+现在分词"构成，主句为we should be self-disciplined enough and not cheat，主句的主语与动词take存在逻辑上的主动关系．

解答 This quotation from ThomasMacaulay tells us that it is self-discipline that reflects a man's realcharacter．【高分句型】Therefore，we should beself-disciplined anytime even if we know that our behavior will never be foundout．（对引语的理解）
For example，when taking exams，we should be self-disciplined enough and not cheat．【高分句型】For another，it is essential for us to learn to control ourselves well onthe Internet．We can't be addicted to computer games or bad information，nor can we use theInternet to attack others immorally and illegally．【高分句型】In addition，through self-discipline we should avoid and resist differentkinds of temptations，which is of great help to prevent corruptions．（举例说明）
In conclusion，being self-disciplined not only helps us improve ourselves，but contributes to buildingup a harmonious and civilized society．As the saying goes，the day has eyes and the night has ears．We should make a reasonablechoice about what to do wherever and whenever we are．（恰当的结尾）

点评 写作看图作文时，首先认真看图，结合图片和文字，确定所要表达的主题是什么，然后围绕主题，提炼要点，合理想象，对译出的要点通过合理的组合，加上必要的连接词使表达连贯．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．