Question

3．假定你是李华，你在上一封信中邀请Dr．Brown参加你们的毕业晚会，但你把时间和地点说错了．请给Dr．Brown写一封道歉信，内容包括：
1．为自己的失误道歉；
2．告知其正确的时间地点；
3．希望Dr．Brown能来．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，给Dr．Brown写一封道歉信，对自己把邀请Dr．Brown参加毕业晚会的时间和地点说错了表示抱歉并告知其正确的时间地点．
写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
写作要点：1．为自己的失误道歉； 2．告知其正确的时间地点；3．希望Dr．Brown能来．
重要短语：make a mistake（犯错），invited sb to do （邀请某人做某事），due to sth（由于某事），apologize to sb for sth（因某事向某人道歉），inform sb of（通知某人某事），have the staff meeting （开员工会议），advise sb to do sth（建议某人做某事），on time（准时），in advance（提前），more than delighted（非常高兴），spare some time（抽出一些时间），look forward to （期望）．
【高分句型一】
1．I am terribly sorry for making a mistake in my last letter，which invited you to our graduation party．
此处是关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，主句为"I am terribly sorry for making a mistake in my last letter"，关系代词"which"在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．
【高分句型二】
2．The graduation party is going to be held at 7：30 p．m．on June 30^th in the school lecture hall，where we usually have the staff meeting．
此处是由关系副词"where"引导的非限制性定语从句，主句为"The graduation party is going to be held at 7：30 p．m．on June 30^th in the school lecture hall"，先行词为"in the school lecture hall"．
【高分句型三】
3．All the attendants are advised to arrive a few minutes earlier so that we can start on time．
此处是由"so that+句子"引导的目的状语从句，意为"以便于…"．

解答 Dear Dr．Brown，
I am terribly sorry for making a mistake in my last letter，which invited you to our graduation party．【高分句型一】Due to my carelessness，I provided a wrong time and place．I'm writing to apologize for it and inform you of the correct information．
The graduation party is going to be held at 7：30 p．m．on June 30^th in the school lecture hall，where we usually have the staff meeting．【高分句型二】All the attendants are advised to arrive a few minutes earlier so that we can start on time．【高分句型三】Since you are the most popular foreign teacher in our school，your presence will be greatly honored and appreciated．（告知其正确的时间地点）
Would you please let me know whether you can come or not in advance？We will be more than delighted if you can spare some time from your busy schedule．
Looking forward to your early reply．（希望Dr．Brown能来）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．