Question

14．学校打算在你班推选一名优干，候选人是Tom 和Mary，一部分同学推荐Tom，另部分同学推荐Mary．假如你是班长，你会推荐谁，理由是什么？请根据以下信息和要求给学校负责任王先生写一份电子邮件．
1，推荐Tom的理由：学习成绩优秀，经常受老师表扬．
2，推荐Mary的理由：学习成绩一般但…
3，你的推荐并举例说明理由：…
注意：词数 120左右．

Answer 1

分析 本文是应用文，根据所给要点写一篇电子邮件，推荐一名优干候选人．写作要点：1．推荐人选；2．说明理由．属提纲作文．在写作时人称以第三人称为主．时态以一般现在时为主．重要短语：act as （充当，作为…），…together with…（和…），gets on well with （相处融洽），enough to do（足够做…），explain sth to sb（向…解释），come up with…（想出），agree with（同意）．

解答 Dear Wang，
We are writing to strongly recommend Mary who is the most suitable choice to act as our outstanding class cadre．The reason is that I，together with my classmates，like her．【高分句型】（推荐人选）
Although her academic record is average．We all like her because she has many personal qualities．She is confident，hard-working and helpful．She often explains things to us．Also，she is so kind that she gets on well with all her classmates．She is never selfish．The most important thing is that she is clever and imaginative．【高分句型】She is creative enough to come up with new ideas．We think she has all the qualities to be a good class cadre．We hope you can agree with us．（说明理由）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．