Question

3．目前，父母对孩子的生活、学习等方面包办现象非常普遍．请你根据以下提示，以We Want to Be Independent为题，用英语写一篇短文．
1．描述这一现象及其弊端；
2．你认为父母应该…；
3．孩子应该…．．
注意：1．词数：120-150；
2．可适当增加细节．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一）They make beds，wash clothes or even make study plans for their kids，resulting in the fact that the kids are not capable of coping with real problems both in life and study．
该句使用了非谓语动词，resulting in这是个现在分词短语做状语，比表示结果；在fact后面that引导的是一个同位语从句．
（高分句型二）Meanwhile，enough space should be given to the kids for their further development，in which case，the kids will experience life and learn some practical skills．
该句型should be given是一个被动句型；in which case引导一个非限制性定语从句，意思是如果这种情况的话．
重点单词和短语：result in 导致； be capable of 有能力的；be beneficial to 对…有好处；
还有很多的连接词，如：therefore，meanwhile，as for，after all，beneficial to 让整个文章非常顺畅，过度很自然．

解答 Nowadays，some parents are too protective and they want to shelter their kids from any trouble．（高分句型一）They make beds，wash clothes or even make study plans for their kids，resulting in the fact that the kids are not capable of coping with real problems both in life and study．Therefore，something must be done about the situation．（列举父母包办现象）
   Parents are supposed to trust their children，which is beneficial to their growth．Meanwhile，enough space should be given to the kids for their further development，in which case，（高分句型二）the kids will experience life and learn some practical skills．（父母应该做的事情）
   （孩子应该做的事情）As for children，it's important for us to be self-confident； after all，we have grown up and we are expected to deal with our personal matters properly．What's more，when in trouble，we might as well face up to the challenges first because in most cases，our ability is established in the process of overcoming difficulties on our own．
    I'm sure that with efforts from both sides，the situation will be improved and we will actually be independent．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．