Question

【题目】一个英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英文稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。

写作要点：

1.它是中国传统节日之一；

2.家人团聚；

3.赏月、吃月饼；

4.还有旅游、访友等其他活动；

5.……

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使用文连贯；

3.开头语已您写好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：

中秋节:the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历: lunar calendar

The Mid- Autumn Festival

The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of Our Chinese lunar calendar.

……

Answer 1

【答案】

The Mid- Autumn Festival

The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of Our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we admire the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruits, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲式作文。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。本文要求介绍中秋节，除此之外，还要介绍人们在这个节日经常要做的事情，比如说家庭团聚、上月等等，注意要点要齐全。

【亮点说明】 本文要点齐全，条理清晰。使用了多种句式，如状语从句：no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration.；名词性从句：What we love most is the time we admire the full moon together.。也使用了许多较高级短语，如：enjoy great popularity、with the beautiful moon up in the sky、in addition to等。