Question

18．假定你是李华，这周末你参加了一个志愿者活动．请根据下列提示写一封邮件与你的美国朋友Jack分享你的这次经历；
（1）活动内容；
（2）你的收获．
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Jack：
I'm writing to share with you my experience at the weekend．（点明书信目的）I took part in a volunteer activity．My duty was to clean a busy street which is about four hundred meters long．After I got up at seven o'clock，sleepy，I went out without a second thought．Cleaning the street seems easy，but sometimes it is very dangerous as you have to be careful of passing cars and bikes．I threw myself onto the bed as soon as I got back home in the afternoon．（记叙活动过程）It was not until then that I realized how great street cleaners are．So I hope everyone should keep our surroudings clean so as to reduce cleaners abandon．All drivers must have an eye on cleaners cleaning the street especially at dawn．（（自己的收获）
What about your weekend？Please tell me in your next email．
Regards，Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇记叙一个志愿者活动的作文．就题目要求可知用第一人称，用一般过去时态写活动．内容包括：一记叙活动内容；二记叙活动过程；三自己的收获．
高分句型：
1．My duty was to clean a busy street which is about four hundred meters long．句子里which引导定语从句，代指先行词a busy street．
我的职责是打扫一条400米长的繁华街道．
2．Cleaning the street seems easy，but sometimes it is very dangerous as you have to be careful of passing cars and bikes．句子里Cleaning the street 是动名词做主语；as引导原因状语从句，表示"因为"．
打扫街道看起来很容易，但是有时候很危险，因为你必须时刻当心经过的车辆．

解答 Dear Jack：
 I'm writing to share with you my experience at the weekend．（点明书信目的）I took part in a volunteer activity．My duty was to clean a busy street which is about four hundred meters long．【高分句型一】After I got up at seven o'clock，sleepy，I went out without a second thought．Cleaning the street seems easy，but sometimes it is very dangerous as you have to be careful of passing cars and bikes．【高分句型二】I threw myself onto the bed as soon as I got back home in the afternoon．（记叙活动过程）It was not until then that I realized how great street cleaners are．So I hope everyone should keep our surroudings clean so as to reduce cleaners abandon．All drivers must have an eye on cleaners cleaning the street especially at dawn．（自己的收获）
What about your weekend？Please tell me in your next email．
Regards，Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
提纲作文就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块，以条目的形式列出，请考生据此进行写作．这实际上是对考生思路和文章写作范围所作的明确限定．因此，提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及到，一个也不能遗漏．