16.假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(

),并在其下面写上该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Thanks for your letter.I'm glad to know that you are getting along well on your classmates.
Well,I agree that it's difficulty to choose our future occupations as there are lots of different jobs.However,I would like not follow in my parents'footsteps because I'm not interested in his professions.I've asked my father for advices.He suggested I chose my career according to my preferences.
As for me,I enjoy travel around and I want to see the world.Perhaps I'd rather work as a guide in tourism.Therefore,I haven't made the final choice yet.I like playing the football too.
Some people turn their hobbies into their careers.Have you any hobbies?Drop myself a line when you can.