Question

【题目】高三的你明年即将毕业。现在校报征稿，请根据以下要点写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对高三生活的体会和建议。

1. 对老师与家长的关爱表示感谢；

2. 向与自己发生过矛盾的同学表达歉意；

3. 努力学习，实现人生梦想；

4. 对学弟、学妹的建议。

注意：

1. 可适当加入细节，使行文连贯；

2. 词数：100 左右（开头已给出，不计入总字数）。

High school is always considered as the most cherished period of one’ s life. As a Senior 3 student, it won’t be long before I graduate.

Answer 1

【答案】

High school is always considered as the most cherished period of one’s life. As a Senior 3 student, it won’t be long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.

Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation of help from those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, it's high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, I've made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, "No pains, no gains."?

Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men

【解析】

试题分析：

高三的你明年即将毕业。现在校报征稿，请根据以下要点写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对高三生活的体会和建议。1. 对老师与家长的关爱表示感谢；2. 向与自己发生过矛盾的同学表达歉意；3. 努力学习，实现人生梦想；4. 对学弟、学妹的建议。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1. 可适当加入细节，使行文连贯；

2. 词数：100 左右（开头已给出，不计入总字数）。

【亮点说明】High school is always considered as the most cherished period of one’s life.被动语态和最高级在句中使用；As a Senior 3 student, it won’t be long before I graduate.时间状语从句恰到好处；Secondly, it's high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood.句中运用了定语从句；Above all, I've made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success.句中运用for引导的并列句；Just as the old saying goes, "No pains, no gains."? 谚语的运用很有亮点；Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men原因状语从句运用到位。