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第三节书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter给你发来E-mail寻求帮助。请根据E-mail内容、写作要点和写作要求回信。
Dear Li Hua,
My mom and dad have a rule for their kids: You get all A’s in your exams or you’re out．I’m only 18, I do my homework and try my best, but I feel the pressure from them and I worry about what it’s doing to me．I wonder what it is like in your family．What should I do?
Yours
Peter
写作要点：
告诉Peter你的情况（不能出现真实姓名、学校、家庭地址等信息）；
给Peter提出解决问题的具体建议。
写作要求：
词数100以上（不含写好的部分）；
内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯；
书写清晰、工整。
Dear Peter,
I’m surprised this kind of thing should happen in your country…
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Answer 1

One possible version;
Dear Peter,
I’m surprised this kind of thing should happen in your country. Here in China parents usually take their children to all kinds of crash courses after class, which are supposed to help them get top grades in all exams. But in my family my parents treat me as their friend and won’t put too much pressure on me and allow me to develop my own interest in art, music and sports. So I’m pretty lucky in this aspect. I suggest that you have a heart-to-heart talk with your parents and tell them that they should set high standards, reward achievement but not punish poor performance. I’m sure they will understand you sooner or later.
Yours
Li Hua

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