Question

9．假设今年暑假，你准备去某地做一次故地重游的旅行，并准备带上你的朋友们一起去．请写一篇文章介绍你的旅行计划，主要包括以下内容：
•准备去什么地方
•故地重游的原因
•本次计划如何开展
•希望做些什么准备
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Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一文章，介绍一次和朋友一起故地重游的旅行计划．写作要点包括：1．准备去什么地方； 2．故地重游的原因；3．本次计划如何开展；4．希望做些什么准备．
写作时人称以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
重要短语：take advantage of（利用），a large-scale （大规模的，大量的），apply to do sth （申请做某事），a good chance to do sth （做某事的机会），make sure （确保），be under control （在控制，掌握之中），in advance（提前），be of great importance（有重要性），make sb exhausted （使某人精疲力竭），prevent oneself from doing（阻止某人做某事）．
【高分句型】

1．I'm going to take advantage of my summer holiday to revisit Beijing with my friends，for the reason ①that a large-scale amusement park will be opened in July and we have applied to be volunteers for 15 days，②which is a good chance to play as well as work．
①这里是由that引导的同位语从句，that引导的从句‘a large-scale amusement park will be opened in July and we have applied to be volunteers for 15 days'解释说明reason的具体内容．
②这里是由which引导的非限制性定语从句，主句为‘I'm going to take advantage of my summer holiday to revisit Beijing with my friends'，定语从句中which作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．

2．With so much preparatory work to do，we need to plan our traveling ahead to make sure everything is under control．

这里是with复合结构在句中作原因状语，结构为"with+宾语+不定式"．主句中"we need to plan our traveling ahead to make sure everything is under control"的不定式短语"to make sure everything is under control"作目的状语．

解答 I'm going totake advantage of my summer holiday to revisit Beijing with my friends，（准备去什么地方）for the reason that alarge-scale amusement park will be opened in July and we have applied to bevolunteers for 15 days，which is a good chance to play as well as work．【高分句型】（故地重游的原因）
With so muchpreparatory work to do，we need to plan our traveling ahead to make sureeverything is under control．【高分句型】Firstand foremost，we need to decide if we go there and back by train or plane，thenbook the ticket in advance．Secondly，the confirmation of our accommodation isof great importance，since a far distance may make us exhausted during the workdays．What's more，the outdoor activities must be a considerable challenge forus，so sun protection is the first priority such as sunhat，sun scream andcooling oil．Each one should prevent ourselves from heat stroke．（本次计划如何开展）
At last，there's still a lot of work to do before setting off．But what matters most isto take your good mood and camera to record your traveling bit by bit fromheart．【高分句型】（希望做些什么准备）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．