Question

【题目】Love Tunnel sees lots of love and trash

Bearing a resemblance to the forest－surrounded “Love Tunnel” in Ukraine, the twokilometer tunnel in Jiangning district Nanjing saw a recent rise in popularity as more than 2,000 tourists paid a visit every day this summer.The high number of visitors caused traffic safety concerns and increased the workload of sanitation workers.The Nanjing government had intended to cut the trees by the end of 2014.After the Nanjing government was forced to draft plans to cut the trees due to public pressure, visitors poured into a railway section that runs through thick forest for sightseeing and to take photos this weekend, leaving the railway with overwhelming piles of trash.

However, in response to the government's plan, complaints and outcries were made by the citizens that the love tunnel should be reserved.They claim that walking along the leafy green tunnel is like entering a fairy tale, and a possible decision to tear down the trees could bring the story to a pitiful end.

注释：sanitation 卫生

【写作内容】

1．以大约30个词左右概括短文的内容要点；

2．以大约120个词谈谈你对“爱情隧道”该不该保留的看法，并说出你的理由。

【写作要求】

1．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不能直接引用原文中的句子；

2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Nanjing government planned to cut the trees surrounding the “Love Tunnel” for the high number of visitors caused both safety concerns and pollutions, which gave rise to the objections of citizens.

I am totally in favor of the citizen's point of view that the fascinating love tunnel ought to be reserved.For one thing, it would be a great pity to put an end to the fairytalelike scenic spot, which brings peace and beauty to the visitors.For another thing, in a bid to solve the problem of safety concerns and pollutions, the authority could come up with a way to preserve the green corridor while also improving the safety of both people and trains.

Therefore, as long as the visitors and the authorities make joint efforts to preserve the love tunnel, it will surely serve as a marvelous tourist attraction for us without any concerns.

【解析】试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文内容符合要求，结构严谨，语言精练，同时句中使用高级词汇和高级句子。which gave rise to the objections of citizens.非限制性定语从句用在句中；I am totally in favor of the citizen's point of view that the fascinating love tunnel ought to be reserved.同位语从句恰到好处；as long as the visitors and the authorities make joint efforts to preserve the love tunnel, it will surely serve as a marvelous tourist attraction for us without any concerns.as long as引导条件状语从句；另外，For one thing, For another thing, Therefore,的运用为文章增色添彩。