Question

你校英语论坛对是否需要安装"绿坝——花季护航"软件(the software Green Dam —Youth Escort)以保证学生健康上网一事展开了一场激烈的讨论。众说纷纭,莫衷一是,有支持,亦有反对。请结合下面列出的原因,在论坛上发贴来阐述一下你个人对此问题的看法。(词数:80-100词)。
支持理由
1. 安装容易，操作简单，便于家长监控孩子的上网活动；
2. 能过滤一些黄色网站，帮助我们营造一个健康的互联网环境。
反对理由
1. 不能从根本上解决学生浏览不良网站的问题；
2. 国家每年为此耗资巨大；
3. 软件本身不成熟，经常出错误。
你的观点？
参考词汇:
安装install；  过滤filter；    黄色网站porn web-site

Answer 1

One possible version:
There is no doubt that we should protect students from harmful websites. But we argue about whether we should install the software Green Dam —Youth Escort.
There are two main reasons why we should install the software. First, the software is easy to install and use. It is convenient for parents to watch over their children’s net activities. Second, it can filter some porn websites, which will help us get a healthy Internet environment. However, some think it cannot protect students from all harmful websites. It costs the government too much every year. Even worse, it is not well-developed.
As for me, I think we should install the software. It has more advantages than disadvantages.

该篇书面表达要求明确就是否需要安装"绿坝——花季护航"软件(the software Green Dam —Youth Escort)以保证学生健康上网一事表明自己的观点并将支持与反对者的理由表述清楚。难点：1、中文上习惯应用四字短语“安装容易”“操作简单”“耗资巨大”，如何正确处理。2、分析中文前后两个小分句的关系对于在英语上采用何种从句会有很大的帮助。像“能过滤一些黄色网站，帮助我们营造一个健康的互联网环境。”3、还应注意使用过渡性词语，进而使文章条理清楚，过渡自然。4、恰当的使用课本所学短语可以使文章增色不少。
考查点：提纲作文
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