Question

书面表达

假如你是李磊，最近收到你的李老师来信，询问你最近的英语学习情况。要点如下:

1学习已经取得了很大进步

2.每天怎样学习的情况做一简单回报。

3.感谢老师曾经的帮助。

注意：1.词数：100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

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Dear Mr. Li

　　I’m glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high school student.

When I started senior English in the beginning, I found it much more difficult than what we learned in junior school and I almost lose heart. Later, I realized the importance of English, so I got up early every morning, recited English words, listened to English tapes and did a lot of exercises. I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways of learning English.

Now, I’m improving my English greatly. And I’m getting more and more interested in learning it. Thank you so much for your great help in your class.

Wish you all the best.

Yours,

Li Lei

【解析】

试题分析：打造文章之骨架审好题，立好意后，就要写提纲，打造文章的骨架。文章布局要做好三件事：安排好层次段落，铺设好过渡，处理好开头和结尾。理文章之脉络一篇短文的段落一般分为引导段、主题段和结尾段。每段的主题句非常重要，是作者思维的起点，切题的准绳，阐述的对象。看到段落主题句，读者大致了解段落要阐述的内容。段落主题句通常是一个语法结构完整、内容概括、用词简洁明了的单句。通常将段落主题句置于段落的开头，可使文章结构更清晰，有说服力。

考点：提纲作文。

点评：用好连接词，注意段落间、句子间的连贯性。要做到所写文章层次分明，思路清晰，文字连贯，就需要在句与句之间，段与段之间架起一座座桥梁，而连接词起的正是桥梁作用。