Question

下列文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增
加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:   1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
　   Fang Tong is 34 years old, an actor, director and teacher of Beijing Opera
Theatre. Most of his students are from other part of  China and have come to Beijing at
a very young age of sixteen or seventeen. He hopes create an environment for his
students that it is much more relaxing than the one he used to study in. He thought that
an actor should relax himself when performing. Yet his students deep respect him and
he never needs to raise his voice in order to be hearing. For his opinion, actors should
go on even when they feel they have made mistake in their performances because the
moment is already gone but people can never be back to it. So art is always changing
and developing.

Answer 1

【小题1】part- parts
【小题2】a-the
【小题3】hope∧to
【小题4】去掉 it
【小题5】thought-thinks
【小题6】deep-deeply
【小题7】hearing-heard
【小题8】For-In
【小题9】mistake-mistakes 或在mistake前加a
【小题10】but-and

解析【小题1】指来自中国的其它地区，使用复数形式。
【小题2】特指16，17岁的年纪。
【小题3】固定词组hope to do sth希望做某事。
【小题4】that指代environment在句中做主语，it多余了。
【小题5】本文整个文章是一般现在时。
【小题6】用副词deeply修饰动词respect.
【小题7】为了被听见，这里使用被动语态的形式。
【小题8】In one’s opinion是固定词组。
【小题9】mistake是可数名词，故可以使用make a mistake,或者make mistakes.
【小题10】前后两句话是并列关系