Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Peter,

How times flies! It had been almost a year since you left China to Sweden. During your home stay at my home, we had such wonderful time that it seemed as if everything had been happened yesterday. I have been long to hear all about you and missing you so much. Fortunate, I was selected as one of the student representative to pay a visit to your school. The visit will last on July 7th to 20th. And as a super soccer fan, I’d really love to visit our local soccer club.

I can’t wait for the day to come where I can see you.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】1. had---has

2. to---for

3. 在such后加a

4. 去掉been

5. long—longing

76. fortunate---Fortunately

7. representative---representatives

8. on—from

9. our—your

10. where---when

【解析】1.固定句式：It has been +一段时间+since 主语+一般过去时态+---，根据句意可知把had---has。

2.固定搭配：leave for去某地，故把to---for。

3.句意：我们有这样一个美妙的时侯，似乎每件事情都已经发生。根据句意可知在such后加a。

4.happen是不及物动词，没有被动语态，故去掉been。

5.句意：我一直渴望听到关于你的所有。根据句意可知此处用现在完成进行时态，故把long—longing。

6.副词修饰整个句子，故把Fortunate---Fortunately。

7. one of后面跟可数名词的复数形式，故把representative---representatives。

8.句意：从7月7号到20号。from---to---从---到---，故把on—from。

9.句意：我真的希望拜访你们当地的足球俱乐部。根据句意可知把our—your。

10.句意：我迫不及待地想那一天的到来，在那一天我能见到你。此处是when引导的定语从句，故把where---when。