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 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A ) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

In recent years，many flowers shops have been appeared in our small

town. It is common for people to buy flowers when they go to a gathering,

visiting a sick friend,or attend a wedding or birthday party. I still remember

clear one day last year when Tom,a disabled student,presented some flowers

to his mother to express his gratitude for her. He owing his entire life to his

mother’s kind and care. With her，he would not have had the confidence or the

courage to fight his disability. As a result the great effort he has made，he

was finally admitted to a key university.

Answer 1

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in our small town. It is common for people to buy flowers when they go to a gathering,visiting a sick friend,or attend a wedding 

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or birthday party. I still remember clear one day last year when

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Tom,a disabled student,presented some flowers to his mother to express his gratitude for her. He owing his entire life to his 

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mother’s kind and care. With her,he would not have had the

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confidence or the courage to fight his disability. As a result +of

the great effort he has made,he was finally admitted to a key 

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university.