精英家教网 > 高中英语 > 题目详情

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Brad,
I’m very glad to hear from you. In your last letter you ask about the post-80s in China. Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group. Comparing with our parents, life for us is getting much hard. The job market is tough and the houses expensively to afford. Now many girls prefer to marry with a man who owns a house and a car. Therefore, I don’t think love built on house and cars is true love,  and I doubt how long it will last. As a matter of fact though situations are tough today, a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts live a good life. I believe we will have a nice future.
Li Hua


【小题1】ask—asked
【小题2】the—a
【小题3】Comparing---Compared
【小题4】hard---harder
【小题5】expensively—expensive
【小题6】去掉marry后的with
【小题7】Therefore—However
【小题8】house---houses
【小题9】we---us
【小题10】offer后加to

解析试题分析:做为80后的一员,作者在文中介绍了80后一代的处境,作者认为和父母相比,80后的生活更加不易,不仅工作难找, 房子买不起,而且很多女孩都希望嫁给有车有房的人,但是作者认为尽管处境艰难,人们还是要努力去创造自己美好的未来。
【小题1】考查动词时态。In your last letter you askabout the post-80s 。从your last letter判断此句应该用一般过去时,所以把ask改为asked。
【小题2】考查冠词用法。Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group. 根据语境可知此处是泛指概念,句意:实际上,我就是属于这个群体的一个男孩,所以把the 改为a。
【小题3】考查非谓语动词。Comparing with our parents, life for us is getting much hard. 从结构可知句子主语life和compare之间是动宾关系,所以把Comparing改为Compared。
【小题4】考查形容词用法。life for us is getting much hard. 从上下文可知作者是用自己的生活与过去父母们的生活相比,应该用比较级,所以把hard改为harder
【小题5】考查形容词用法。The job market is tough and the houses expensively to afford。从结构可知houses后省略了be动词,所以应该用形容词,把expensively改为expensive。完整句子应该是the houses are expensive to afford。
【小题6】考查动词用法。many girls prefer to marry with a man ,marry是及物动词,与某人结婚“marry sb”所以去掉marry后的with。
【小题7】考查副词用法。Therefore, I don’t think love built on house ,从上下文可知此处是转折关系,所以把Therefore改为However。
【小题8】考查名词单复数。I don’t think love built on house ,house是可数名词,根据句意判断此处应该用house的复数形式,所以把house改为houses。
【小题9】考查代词用法。a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts ,介词of后跟宾语,所以应该用人称代词宾格,把we改为us。
【小题10】考查动词不定式… are making great efforts live a good life,从语境可知live a good life 是make great efforts 的目的,所以在offer后加to。
考点:考查短文改错。

练习册系列答案
相关习题

科目:高中英语 来源: 题型:填空题

单句改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(?),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
【小题1】Do you want a friend, to who you can tell everything?
【小题2】Visitors will have difficulty find proper hotels during the national holiday.
【小题3】As a matter of fact, I’m involved in outdoors sports frequently.
【小题4】I thought it was no good persuading her to stopping smoking.
【小题5】Children should be made understand the importance of saving water.
【小题6】It was not until I came back he went off.
【小题7】People make choices base on how the products are grown or made.
【小题8】The boy preferred staying at home to go out to play.
【小题9】He failed the biology exam and that was because of he didn’t do well in it before.
【小题10】I bought one such a dictionary as you did yesterday.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英语 来源: 题型:填空题

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 \ 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;    2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My neighbor Li Hai is going to graduate from college soon and he hasn’t found the job yet. He was once advising to learn computer skills, so he thought it was difficult. When he saw others learning English, he shook his head, says it was too hard to remember new words. He enjoyed watching TV, playing card, smoking and so on. She felt it was hard for him to give up all these habits. Not long ago, he went to look a job. When he knew talents were great needed, he sighed and regretted the time that what he had wasted. He told me how he wished he has worked hard in college and asked me not to copy his example.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英语 来源: 题型:填空题

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As is known by all,the Internet is playing a more and more important part on our daily life.On the Internet,we can not only read news at home or abroad but also get much information as possible.For an example,we often send e-mails and make telephone call to our families and friends.What’s more,they can go to school on the Internet,read different kinds of books and even teaches ourselves English.We can also listen to music,watching sports and play computer games.We can even do shopping without left our houses.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英语 来源: 题型:填空题

My mother is a village woman, that is already in her fifties. She has a little education, but she knows knowledge is of greatly importance to young people. She often asks me how I get along for my studies and encourages me study hard. My mother do everything she can for me so that I can spend more time on my studies. Once she was badly ill and had stayed in bed for several day. When I got home, I found the light was still on and my mother was sitting in bed, made new clothes for me! I was so deeply moving that tears came to my eyes. Such is my mother, a kind but hard-working woman.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英语 来源: 题型:填空题

Many scientists believe that life begins in the ocean long ago. For age man used the ocean to discover and explore new lands. Now man spends a great deal of time or money discover the ocean. We know it is rich at minerals which the world need. We know too that it contains a plenty of food for all the people in the world. We know that if the salt were taken from it, it’s water would turn the deserts into rich farm lands. We know a great deal about this land frontier, as it has called. But we still need to learn many more about it.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英语 来源: 题型:填空题

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每句不超过两个错误;
2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
3. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My mother is a village woman, who is already in fifties.She has very little education, and she knows knowledge is of very importance to young people. She often asked me how I get along with my studies and encourages me study hard. My mother does everything she can for me so that I can spend more time on my study. Once she was bad ill and had stayed in bed
for several days. When I got home, I found the light was still off and mother was sitting in bed, made new clothes for me! I was so deeply moved that tear came to my eyes. So is my mother, a kind and hard-working woman.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英语 来源: 题型:填空题

I’m good at singing. I’ve been interested in music and dreamed of become a singer ever since my childhood. My parents began to teach me children’s songs until I was only three. After I started school I had more chances to enjoy various song, such as folk songs and popular songs, and practicing singing a lot. I like singing English songs as well, which greatly benefits me in my learning of English. 
Practice makes perfectly. I have made great progress in singing and my efforts have paid for. Last year, I take part in a talent show and won prize.I think everyone is unique and has our advantages in some respects. I know my singing skills still need to be improved. But I’m confidence that I will serve our society with my songs in the future.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英语 来源: 题型:填空题

短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
I saw a traffic accident on my way home on last night. A car hit a motorbike. The motorbike driver badly hurt and sent to hospital. After a while, the traffic police came. Under the help of the people who witnessed the accident, the police found out a truth. The driver of the car was drinking and his car went out of control. At last he was taken to the police station. All the people there think the car driver was to blame for this accident.
Which is reported in the news reports, drunk driving causes many people lose their lives, such as the accident that happened in Hangzhou and Chengdu. It is high time that we prevent drunk driving.

查看答案和解析>>

同步练习册答案