Question

1．假定你是李华，你和朋友打算在校园网上成立一个英文读书俱乐部．请你给美国笔友艾伦写一封电子邮件，介绍该俱乐部拟开展的活动，并希望对方提出建议．要点如下：
1．活动形式、内容及心得；
2．请艾伦提出建议．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．格式和开头语已给出，但不计入总词数．
Dear Allan，
How is everything going？I'm delighted to tell you that my friends and I have decided to set up an English reading club on our school website．The activities we have planned are as follows．
Firstly，we are going to organize reading activities regularly．Secondly，club members will be encouraged to communicate with each other online about the books they've read，which will allow them to have a better understanding of the books．Besides，excellent books will be recommended so that club members can have access to more books that are worth reading．
I would appreciate it if you can give me some advice．Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
I'm delighted to tell you that my friends and I have decided to set up an English reading club on our school website．
我很高兴地告诉你，我和我的朋友已经决定在我们学校的网站上建立一个英语阅读俱乐部．
高分句型二：
Secondly，club members will be encouraged to communicate with each other online about the books they've read，which will allow them to have a better understanding of the books．
其次，俱乐部的成员将被鼓励互相网上关于他们读过的书进行交流，这将使他们能够有一个更好的理解对于书．

解答 Dear Allan，
      How is everything going？I'm delighted to tell you that my friends and I have decided to set up an English reading club on our school website．The activities we have planned are as follows（高分句型一）．
      Firstly，we are going to organize reading activities regularly．Secondly，club members will be encouraged to communicate with each other online about the books they've read，which will allow them to have a better understanding of the books（高分句型二）．Besides，excellent books will be recommended so that club members can have access to more books that are worth reading．
      I would appreciate it if you can give me some advice．Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．