Question

假定你是一名导游，你将接待一个外国旅游团。请你拟订一份120词左右的导游词向游客介绍青岛。要点如下：

1. 青岛市位于山东半岛南端，面积10, 654平方公里，总人口699万；

2. 青岛三面环海，大海是青岛的魅力所在；

3. 古代名人如李白、蒲松龄、康有为等的足迹遍布各地，留下了华美的诗文；

4. 青岛是现代化城市，现代化的工厂和楼房林立。

参考词汇：半岛 peninsula

Ladies and gentlemen,

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Thank you.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to our city.

I'd like to tell you something about our city, Qingdao, which lies in the south of Shandong Peninsula. It covers an area of 10, 654 square kilometers and has a population of 6,990,000. When you come here, you will be attracted by the sea, which holds Qingdao in its arms. It is a beautiful world-famous city. Many ancient celebrities, such as Li Bai, Pu Songling, Kang Youwei have traveled to many of the places in Qingdao and have written beautiful poems and essays about their experiences. Besides, Qingdao is also a modern international city. It has many modern factories and tall buildings.

I'm sure you will have a good time here.

Thank you.

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类作文，要求写一篇关于向游客介绍青岛的导游词，要点都已经给出，包括青岛的面积，人口，地理位置，人文和现代的青岛，要考生表达清楚，审题时注意本文使用的时态是一般现在时为主，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用省略句，倒装句和强调句型准确表述。如范文里面的When you come here, you will be attracted by the sea, which holds Qingdao in its arms.和It covers an area of 10, 654 square kilometers and has a population of 6,990,000.还有要用适当的关联词把文章串联起来：象such as，besides等等。

考点：考查提纲类短文写作。

点评：提纲类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，词汇句型的选用，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。