Question

根据下列表格中的内容， 写一篇关于沙尘暴的文章。词数：120个左右

沙尘暴的现象	席卷中国北方很多地区
沙尘暴出现的原因	砍树挖草；过度放牧（over graze)
防止的方法	至少列举三点

 

Answer 1

Nowadays, there are many environment problems such as air pollution, water pollution and sandstorms. The polluted air does harm to people’s health. The polluted water causes diseases and death. What’s more. Many animals and plants are dying out as a result of all kinds of environment problems. People should be responsible for the problems because with the development of society., more cars and waste are produced and more natural resources are being used, which has made or environment worse and worse.
As far as I’m concerned, to protect the environment, the government must take more effective measures, it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection and those who destroy the environment should be severely punished. Only in this way can we have a good environment.

试题分析：考查提纲类作文，要求写一篇关于沙尘暴的文章，要点都已经给出，沙尘暴的现象，沙尘暴出现的原因，还有防止的方法，要考生自己列出两点，审题时注意本文使用的时态，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用省略句，倒装句和强调句型准确表述。如范文里面的more cars and waste are produced and more natural resources are being used, which has made or environment worse and worse.和 Only in this way can we have a good environment.还有要用适当的关联词把文章串联起来：象What’s more. As far as I’m concerned,等等。
点评：提纲类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，词汇句型的选用，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。