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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线(___),并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor. I didn't have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and the actor couldn't be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building. He was right there in the front of me! I couldn't believe my luck-not only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!


【小题1】makes→making
【小题2】actor→actors
【小题3】but→so/and
【小题4】get后加it
【小题5】have---had
【小题6】everywhere→anywhere
【小题7】disappointing→disappointed
【小题8】out后加of
【小题9】去掉the
【小题10】had 改成have

解析试题分析:本文写的是作者在上周六早晨在公园里散步时的好运:遇到了自己最喜欢的演员,不仅拍了照还签了名。
【小题1】作者遇到了一群人在拍电影,此处拍电影应该是crew的定语,是主动关系所以改成making.
【小题2】固定短语one of + 复数名词….中的一个,所以改成actors.
【小题3】根据前后句义:我没带相机,匆忙的回去去取,是因果关系或者顺承关系,所以改成so /but.
【小题4】根据句义:匆忙回家去取相机,少宾语,所以加上it。
【小题5】时态错误。by the time+过去的时间状语,应该用过去完成时:had done,所以改成had。
【小题6】根据句义是在任何地方都看不到那个演员,所以该成anywhere。
【小题7】形容词错误。形容词:--ed (人)感到….,---ing 令人….此句:我感到失望,所以改成disappointed。
【小题8】固定短语:walk out of 从….走出来,所以要加上of .
【小题9】冠词错误。固定短语:in front of 在…前面(范围之外),in the front of 在…前面(范围之内),所以去掉the。
【小题10】本句是一个倒装句,把did提前构成倒装,也显示了时态是过去时,所以谓语动词要改成原形,所以改成have。
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