Question

假定你是李华，上时发现有外籍教师在络上辅导英语口语，因此发帖向在线外籍教师Peter寻求帮助。要点包括：
1．自我介绍（姓名、身份及年级）；
2．英语学习情况、困难及感受：
3．请求给予帮助。
注意：1词数100左右；
2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3开头和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua,a senior student from China, I’m very happy to find that some foreign teachers help students with oral English on line along with your contact information . So I can’t wait to post this message to you .
I’ve learnt a lot from my school teachers in the past six years and known about three thousand English words and some basic grammar. I can do some reading and writing in English now. but I still have difficulty in listening and speaking .I always feel nervous when talking with native speakers.
That’s why I am writing to you. It would be nice if you could do me a favor. I’m looking forward to chatting with you often.
Yours,
Li Hua

解析试题解析：本文是一篇记叙文的写作，发帖向在线外籍教师Peter寻求帮助在网络上辅导英语口语，主要包括： 1．要点：自我介绍（姓名、身份及年级）；英语学习情况、困难及感受；请求给予帮助。2.人称：使用第一人称为主；3.时态：一般现在时；4.注意使用一些连词或插入语使文章表达自然、流畅；5.使用一些高级词汇、短语和句型，以提高文章的档次。
【亮点说明】
文章使用了非常好的短语和句子给文章增色，如So I can’t wait to post this message to you .（can’t wait to do sth,迫不及待地做某事），I still have difficulty in listening and speaking .（have difficulty in doing sth，做某事有困难）That’s why I am writing to you.（That’s why ….名词性从句，那是…的原因），I’m looking forward to chatting with you often.（look forward to + doing 期待着做某事）。
考点：提纲作文写作。