Question

【题目】书面表达

假定你是李华，将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业，你从报纸上得知B&B公司要招聘一名英文秘书，你很感兴趣。请给该公司写一封求职信，包括下列要点：

1．成绩优秀； 2. 能熟练使用电脑； 3. 业余爱好…

注意： 1.词数不少于50； 2.开头语和结束语不计入字数。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary. __________________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear Sir/Madam,

I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary. I’m really interested in this position and hope I can work for you.

I will be graduating from Xinxing Foreign Language School this July. I’m an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students. Skilled at using computers, I can type very fast. In my spare time, I read a lot. Poems are my favorite. Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities. Besides, I’m easy to get along with and I like to make friends.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

【解析】

试题分析：本问是一篇求职信，内容是关于自己的优点1．成绩优秀；2. 能熟练使用电脑；3. 业余爱好。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示的3个方面的内容进行说明。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时。以第一人称为主。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如非谓语动词Skilled at using computers和Being an active young person作状语, 此外，文章还使用了短语among the top 5,get along with和besides的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。