Question

1．你校文学社向高三学生征文，请你以"How to Realize my Dream to University"为主题写一篇短文．
写作要点：
1．理想的大学和专业；
2．目前的做法；
3．未来的打算．
注意：
1．短文词数不少于100词；
2．可根据情况增减细节，详略得当；
3．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称．
How to Realize my Dream to University
I often imagine whatuniversity I will be admitted to next year．To behonest，I do hope I can go to Beijing Universityto learn economics which I've dreamed of since I was a child．
As a matter of fact，I haven't completely put my heart into all subjectssuch as Maths，Physics．I oftenwant to play games and don't listen to my teachers carefully in class． As a saying goes，"No pains，no gains"．I do knowif I really want to realize my dream to the university，I have to work hard at all subjects．
From now on，I amdetermined to make full use of my time，attendingmy class attentively，reading wildly，completing all the homework and doing sports to keephealthy．
I believe，only by working hard at all subjects can I make mydream come true．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文，根据所提供的材料，写一篇征文．写作要点包括：理想的大学和专业；目前的做法．写作时应以一般现在时为主．人称以第一人称．重要短语：be admitted to…（被…录取），to be honest （老实讲），dream of （梦想），as a matter of fact…（事实上…），put one's heart into（用心投入），realize one's dream（实现某人的梦想），be determined to（下定决心做某事），make full use of （充分利用）．

解答 How to Realize my Dream to University
I often imagine whatuniversity I will be admitted to next year．To behonest，I do hope I can go to Beijing Universityto learn economics which I've dreamed of since I was a child．【高分句型】（理想的大学和专业）
As a matter of fact，I haven't completely put my heart into all subjectssuch as Maths，Physics．I oftenwant to play games and don't listen to my teachers carefully in class． As a saying goes，"No pains，no gains"．I do knowif I really want to realize my dream to the university，I have to work hard at all subjects．（目前的做法）
From now on，I am determined to make full use of my time，attending my class attentively，reading wildly，completingall the homework and doing sports to keep healthy．【高分句型】（未来的打算）
I believe，only by working hard at all subjects can I make mydream come true．（结尾---总结）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，并适当增加细节．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．