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【题目】书面表达

近年来雾霾天气在中国许多城市频频发生。雾霾天气引起大家极大的关注。请你用英语写一篇有关雾霾的短文向校刊“英语角”投稿,内容包括：

1. 雾霾的危害

2. 雾霾产生的原因

3. 应对雾霾的措施

提示：雾霾 smog

注意：1. 词数120左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.

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Answer 1

【答案】

In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.

Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.

How does it come about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly come as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on.

What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear completely.

【解析】

试题分析：近年来雾霾天气在中国许多城市频频发生。雾霾天气引起大家极大的关注。请你用英语写一篇有关雾霾的短文向校刊“英语角”投稿,内容包括：1. 雾霾的危害 2. 雾霾产生的原因 3. 应对雾霾的措施。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

【亮点说明】Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.被动语态，动词不定式和动名词的完美结合；How does it come about?巧妙使用问句；Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this.此句中出现宾语从句和定语从句；for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice.动名词短语作主语；Only if we work together will smog weather disappear completely. Only if引导的部分倒装运用恰到好处；另外，in particular, suffer from，Consequently, and so on. First,等的使用，也为文章增光添彩。