Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李华。针对我国假期选择出国旅游的人越来越多，但有的游客有不文明行为的现象，请给21st Century Teens编辑部写一封信。内容需要包括以下要点:

1.出境游热的原因，如经济发展的原因、人们对外国文化感兴趣的原因等；

2.旅游中出现了一些不文明现象，如随地吐痰、乱扔垃圾等；

3.你的态度和看法。

注意：1.词数100左右

2.短文开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

参考词汇：不文明行为：immoral behaviors 树立形象：uphold an image

Dear editor,

At present, more and more people choose to travel abroad when they have holidays.

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Thank you for your attention.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

At present, more and more people choose to travel abroad when they have holidays. There are some vital reasons. With the development of people’s living standard and economy, they can afford to go abroad . Besides, more people are becoming interested in foreign cultures, therefore, they are eager to visit them with their own eyes.

However, some people behave very badly in foreign countries. For example, they drop litter everywhere , as well as spit freely in public, which not only shows bad personal qualities , but also does great harm to the image of the country.

Personally, since it’s well known that China is an ancient civilized country with a long history , we should always bear / keep it in mind that it is everyone’s responsibility to uphold image of our motherland.

Thank you for your attention.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】试题分析：假如你是李华。针对我国假期选择出国旅游的人越来越多，但有的游客有不文明行为的现象，请给21st Century Teens编辑部写一封信。内容需要包括以下要点: 1.出境游热的原因，如经济发展的原因、人们对外国文化感兴趣的原因等；2.旅游中出现了一些不文明现象，如随地吐痰、乱扔垃圾等；3.你的态度和看法。这是一篇提纲类作文，需要考生用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，应注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

【亮点说明】文章简洁明了，把需要表达的要点清晰的表达了出来，并且做了适当的扩展，其间也运用了一些连接词和高级的句型。With the development of people’s living standard and economy, they can afford to go abroad .随着人们生活水平和经济的发展，人们可以承担起出国的费用。这一句中的常用句型with the development of 随着…的发展，在句中做伴随状语。they drop litter everywhere , as well as spit freely in public, which not only shows bad personal qualities , but also does great harm to the image of the country.人们随地丢垃圾，随地吐痰，这不仅显示出个人品质低下，还对国家的形象造成了损害。这一句中运用了非限制性定语从句，先行词是前面提到的两个动作，但因为是as well as 连接，谓语动词采用就近原则，所以用的第三人称单数；还运用了not only…but also（不仅…还）这个短语，在not only后面的句子需要用部分倒装形式，即主谓倒装。it’s well known that众所周知。另外文章中还有一些短语用得恰到好处，例如：do harm to对…有害；keep in mind牢记等等。