Question

某中外合资企业在一家英文报上登了一则广告，招聘一名秘书。假如你叫李华，请根据下面的简历表用英语写一封求职信。

姓名	李华	性别	女	身高	1.62米
出生年月	1985.5	婚否	未婚	身体状况	健康
毕业学校	上海商学院
其他：1. 有三年工作经历。      2. 打字快，熟练计算机操作。 3. 擅长英语，懂一些德语。4. 办事认真，待人诚恳，与人和睦相处。

注意：1. 词数：120字左右，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

2. 短文需包括表中所有要点，内容可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

3. 参考词汇：上海商学院 Shanghai Commercial College

Dear sir,

I’m writing to apply for the position as a secretary in your company, which I saw advertised in today’s paper. I believe I have the qualifications to fit the job.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir,

I’m writing to apply for the position as a secretary in your company, which I saw advertised in today’s paper. I believe I have the qualifications to fit the job.

Born in May,1985, I’m now 25 years old and unmarried. I’m 1.62 metres tall and in good health. I graduated from Shanghai Commercial College. Now I have had three years of experience as a secretary and am quite familiar with the office work. Not only can I type well, but more important I can use computer skilfully. My English is excellent. In addition, I have some knowledge of the German language. I am always careful in everything I do. As a female, I am kind and easy to get on with.

I’d greatly appreciate the chance to work in your company. Of course, I’ll work hard if I can hold the position. Thank you very much for your kind attention.

I’m eager for your early reply.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。