Question

2．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack问了你一个有趣的问题：如果你可以拥有一个你的克隆体，期限为一天，你会让它做什么？请根据自己的实际情况，发挥想象，给他回一封邮件．
注意：
1．词数：100-120；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数．
Dear Jack，
You asked me a very interesting question．If I could have a clone of myself for one day，I would have it do the following for me．
      ．
That's my answer to the question．What about you？
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
My grandfather retied andhe is very concerned about my study，so it will tell him how I'm getting along with my study  while they are taking a walk．
我的爷爷退休了他很关心我的学习，所以就告诉他我要随着我的研究在他们散步．
高分句型二：
Occupied with my study，I have little time to help with the housework．Though very busy with their work，my parents still spare time to keep the house tidy．
由于忙于学习，我几乎没有时间帮助做家务．尽管工作很忙，我的父母仍有空余时间保持房子整洁．

解答 Dear Jack，
You asked me a very interesting question．If I could have a clone of myself for one day，I would have it do the following for me．
In the morning，it will accompany my grandfather for a walk outside．My grandfather retied andhe is very concerned about my study，so it will tell him how I'm getting along with my study  while they are taking a walk（高分句型一）．
In the afternoon，it's will be busy at home，cleaning and tidiyng the rooms．Occupied with my study，I have little time to help with the housework．Though very busy with their work，my parents still spare time to keep the house tidy（高分句型二）．As their only son，I hope to share some housework．
In the evening，it will have a talk with my parents and tell them how thankful I am for being their son．
That's my answer to the question．What about you？
Yours，
Li Hua．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．