Question

17．用英文介绍你最难忘的一次旅行．请以The Best Journey of My Life为题，写一篇120词左右的短文．提示：
1Where did you go and how to get there？
2What did you see and do there？
3What do you think of the journey？

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇介绍最难忘的一次旅行的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般过去时态．内容包括：一点明主题；二旅行的地点，活动以及感受．
高分句型：
1．It was two years ago that I went there with my friends．句子里It was 和that 根据强调句式，强调时间状语two years ago．
两年前我和朋友去那里．
2．It was my first time that I had tasted the Crossing Bridge Noodles．句子里用了固定句式It was my first time that 表示"某人第一次做某事"．
这是我第一次品尝过桥米线．

解答 I have been to many places，such as，Beijing，Shanghai，Hongkong，Dalian and so on．But the best journey of my life is the trip to Yunnan．（点明主题）It was two years ago that I went there with my friends．【高分句型一】It took us about three hours to fly from Beijing to Kunming．We visited Kunming，Dali and Lijiang．We climbed the West Mountain and the Jade Dragon Mountain．We visited the Stone forests and the Flower Market．We were so exciting about the beautiful scenery．We had never seen such a beautiful place with the mild climit．People there were friendly and food there were delicious．It was my first time that I had tasted the Crossing Bridge Noodles【高分句型二】So we would never forget this trip．（旅行的地点，活动以及感受）．

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