Question

假定你是李华，你的一位美国朋友Jane在太原学习中文两年，即将回国。现在由你给她发E-mail，邀请她参加为她举办的欢送会，内容主要包括：

(1)祝贺她顺利通过考试，她的学习进步很大，为她骄傲; 

(2)感谢她帮助你们学习英语;

(3)时间：星期六晚六点; 

(4)地点：阳光俱乐部(The Sun Club)302房间;

注意：  (1) 词数：120 左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;   (3)参考词汇：欢送会 farewell party

Dear Jane,

Congratulations on your passing all the exams.

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                                                         Yours Sincerely,

　                                                               Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Jane,

    Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted that you have made great progress in the two years of your studying Chinese in Taiyuan. There is no doubt that all you have gained is the result of your hard work. We are proud of you. And thank you very much for your help with our English. Without your help, we wouldn’t have found English easy and interesting to learn. The wonderful time which we spent together will never be forgotten.

So a farewell party for you has been prepared before you leave for the US. It will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. I wonder if you could come by 6:00 p.m. Our friends and I would appreciate it if you could come to the party.

Looking forward to your early reply.

                                                                    Yours

                                                                  Lihua

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达是一封电子邮件，开头结尾已经给出，所以无需注意格式，只需关注内容的表达、对要点适度进行发挥和想象即可。在写作时应该首先开门见山直接说出写信的目的，即对她表示祝贺和感谢。然后在信的结尾部分提出对她参加欢送会的邀请，不要忘记写出欢送会的时间和地点。在语言方面，因为是表达写信人的感激，所以语言要真切，发自内心，对她的邀请也要真诚，可以使用I wonder if you could come….,would you please give us the honour 等表示礼貌委婉的句子。此外，还要注意连接词的使用，以使文章内容连贯，语言通顺。

【亮点说明】文章在结构上简单明了。开头首先表示了作者对Jane取得成绩的祝贺，然后用I am delighted that …..和we are proud of you表示了对她的努力以及取得成绩的肯定。接着用Without your help…表达了作者的感激和感谢之情，最后用I wonder if you could come by 6:00 p.m. 以及I would appreciate it if you could come to the party.提出作者真诚的邀请，语言礼貌委婉。文中There is no doubt that…. The wonderful time which we spent together will never be forgotten等丰富的句式、以及虚拟语气Without your help, we wouldn’t have found English easy and interesting to learn的使用充分显示了作者扎实的语言功底。

考点：考查提纲作文。