Question

10．假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心（Learning Center）的帮助．根据学校规定，你须书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：
（1）本人简介；
（2）求助内容；
（3）约定时间；
（4）你的联系方式（Email：lihua@126．com；Phone：12345678）
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）结束语以为你写好
Dear  Sir/Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university．I'm writing to ask for help．I came here last month and find many courses interesting．But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library．I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I'm anxious to get help from you．
I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons．Please let me know which day is OK with you．You may email or phone me．Here are my email address and phone number：lihua@126．com，call 12345678． 
Look forward to your reply．
Yours，
 Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是应用文，根据所给要点写一封信．写作要点：（1）本人简介；（2）求助内容；（3）约定时间；（4）你的联系方式，属提纲作文．在写作时人称以第一人称为主．时态以一般现在时为主．重要短语：take summer courses（上暑期课…），ask for help （需求帮助），have some difficulties with （做某事有困难），provides sth for sb （为…提供），be anxious to do （渴望做…），look forward to doing （期望做…）．

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
 I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university．【高分句型】（本人简介） I'm writing to ask for help．I came here last month and find many courses interesting．【高分句型】But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library．I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I'm anxious to get help from you．（求助内容）I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons．Please let me know which day is OK with you．You may email or phone me．（约定时间） Here are my email address and phone number：lihua@126．com，call 12345678．（你的联系方式 ）
       Look forward to your reply．
  Yours，
  Li Hua

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．