Question

智能手机越来越多地受到年轻人青睐，然而过多地玩智能手机可能会使你皮肤松驰，变成“手机脸”。假如你是高三学生李华，你们班的英文班会将就此话题展开讨论，请你用英文拟一篇短文备用。
要点提示：
1.肯定智能手机的好处；
2.说明年轻人依赖智能手机的现象；
3.指出过多玩智能手机的坏处；
4.给出你的意见。Smartphones 智能手机
注意：
1.词数：120词左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Answer 1

Smartphones have really changed our daily life. We can make contact with the world at any time and any place if we have such a device in our hand. However, with the increasing popularity of smartphones among young people, some, especially those who are addicted to their phones, may feel anxious once they are disconnected from them.
There are several disadvantages of using the smartphone for too long. It is now believed that using smartphones could probably cause facial skin and muscle to hang loose if people spend an increasing amount of time sitting with their heads bent and in the same position for a long time. That is horrible.
In my opinion, we students should be aware of the harm of excessive use of smartphones. And we’d better reduce the time of using smartphones in everyday life.

试题分析：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，主题是智能手机的优缺点，给出了大部分要点，还要考生给出自己的观点。文章结构清晰，先是肯定智能手机的好处；，然后指出过多玩智能手机的坏处；
最后是自己的观点，要求考生用地道的英语表达自己的观点，要求观点明确，驾驭语言的能力强，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，使文章成为一个整体。
点评：本文属于正反方观点作文，但是要点给出的不算多，需要考生自己添加部分。在分析部分已经详细说明了。在写作的时候要适合合适的连接词来连接各要点，使他们成为整体。要选择高级的词汇和句型，让文章有变化，有层次。