Question

15．下面短文中有10处语言错误．请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I want to have a pen friend，hopeful a girl in her early twenties，and with interests similar with mine．In my mind，she is someone who are interested in travelling，swimming，and play table tennis．Besides，it would be better for her to have pet dog as I keep one at home for some time．
Although we are thousand of miles away from each other，but I can share with her our travelling experiences，taking care of pets，or whatever we had in common．And I believe I will improve her English by doing so and learns more about her country．

Answer 1

分析 作者在本文描述了自己心目中的笔友应该是一位二十多岁，兴趣与作者相似的女孩，她应该喜欢旅行，游泳，打乒乓球，另外如果再有一只宠物狗就更好了．尽管两人相隔甚远，但是可以分享旅行经历，照顾宠物．而且作者还希望因此而提高英语水平，更多地了解她的国家．

解答 I want to have a pen friend，hopeful a girl in her early twenties，and with interests similar with mine．In my mind，she is someone who are interested in travelling，swimming，and play table tennis．Besides，it would be better for her to have∧pet dog as I keep one at home for some time．
Although we are thousand of miles away from each other，but I can share with her our travelling experiences，taking care of pets，or whatever we had in common．And I believe I will improve her English by doing so and learns more about her country．
详解：
1．hopeful改为hopefully；考查副词，这里用副词作状语修饰动词．
2．with改为to；考查固定搭配，similar to是固定用法，与…相似，所以with 改为 to．
3．are改为is；考查主谓一致，先行词是不定代词，故谓语动词用单数，所以are 改为is．
4．play改为playing；考查并列结构，be interested in中in是介词，后面用动词的-ing形式，play与前面的travelling，swimming是并列成分，形式要保持一致，故把play改为playing．
5．pet前面加a；考查冠词，pet是可数名词的单数形式表示，所以pet dog前加a表示"一只宠物狗"．
6．thousand改为thousands；后面有of，所以Thousand改为thousands，thousands of是固定搭配，意为"数以千计的，成千上万的"．
7．去掉but；考查连词，Although引导让步状语从句时与but不能连用，故but 去掉．
8．had改为have；考查动词的时态，表示经常或反复发生的动作，用一般现在时．
9．her改为my；考查人称代词，结合句意"我相信我会提高我的英语"可知此处应该把her 改为my．
10．learns改为learn；考查并列结构，此处动词learn与前面的improve是并列成分，用在情态动词will之后，所以要用动词原形 learn．

点评 短文改错首先快速阅读短文，了解短文基本大意，确定文章的基本时态，再运用语法，词汇，习惯性短语等基础知识进一步分析各个句子，找出文中的错误加以修改．