Question

书面表达（共25分）（原创）
你朋友Joe写信告诉你他找工作又失败了，他向你询问一些方法，请按照以下写作内容和要求，以英语书信形式给予答复（信的开头和结尾已给出）。
1、正确面对目前形势（全球金融危机、冲击、竞争对手多而且强）；
2、传播你在找工作的信息；
3、精心准备好自己的工作简历；
4、确信自己具备你求职工作所要求的能力；
5、准备好每一次面试，留下好印象，展现自己的能力。
注意：信的开头和结尾已有，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：1、全球金融危机the global financial crisis
2、个人简历resume
Dear Joe,
I’m very sorry to hear you failed again in finding a job.                          
                                                                          
                                                                          
Good luck!
Yours truly
Hanghang

Answer 1

Dear Joe,
I’m very sorry to hear that you failed again in finding a job. Taking a right attitude towards the present situation is a must at first. It’s true that it’s tough seeking for a job—especially if you’re competing with thousands of other hopeful students with the global financial crisis hitting the economy. Here are a few tips which might be of a little use.
Getting connected to your network and keeping everyone informed that you’re looking for a job are surely urgent matters. Meanwhile, it’s worth your time and money to present yourself well by preparing your perfect resume carefully. When you apply for a job, be sure you match any skills required. What’s more, don’t forget to make good preparations for every interview, where and leaving a good impression can make all the differentce in getting the job.
Good luck!
Yours truly
Hanghang

试题分析：本文的写作首先表明让他对现在的就业形式有一个正确的态度a right attitude towards the present situation is a must at first.然后分析工作难找的原因，是因为经融危机the global financial crisis hitting the economy.以及与很多优秀的人才进行竞争competing with thousands of other hopeful students.然后提出自己的建议，传播你在找工作的信息keeping everyone informed that you’re looking for a job、精心准备好自己的工作简历present yourself well by preparing your perfect resume carefully.确信自己具备你求职工作所要求的能力be sure you match any skills required.准备好每一次面试，make good preparations for every interview留下好印象，展现自己的能力expressing your abilities well。
点评：提纲类写作的文章较开放式的文体，比较好写。学生在写作的过程中，首先思路要清晰，要对所表达的句子通顺的说出来，遇到不会的要学会替换所用语，来达到同样的意思。在每一篇作文中，对于表达观点的句子，都要用上起承转合的连词来加强文章的层次感，适当运用俗语，如when it comes to当谈到，运用平时常用的句式来使文章富有变化，表达地道得体。