Question

假设你是李华, 距高考还有2个月左右，现在你正在备战高考, 中学生活即将结束, 在这个特殊时期, 请根据以下内容给自己的父母写一封信。
内容要点：
1. 感谢父母多年来, 特别是高三这一年来的关怀。
2. 向父母简要汇报自己的学习情况。
3. 高考之后帮父母做些家务和自己的打算。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear parents,
Now I know clearly that you both are expecting me anxiously.  
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Yours
LI Hua

Answer 1

Dear parents,
Now I know clearly that you both are expecting me anxiously. I can say nothing but thanks to you both on this special occasion, because words have failed me when I want to express my thanks to you both for the loving care you have shown for me, especially since I went to Senior Three. These days I have been studying hard and have made some progress. And everything has got along well with my college entrance examination. I will perform my ability in the future exam. I hope you both can set your mind at rest.
After the exam, I intend to help you do some housework which I have seldom done before. And I also mean to learn to cook for you both in person.
My dear parents, everything is going on well with me and do have a rest!
Best wishes！
Yours
LI Hua

试题分析：本书面表达是一篇提纲作文。提纲作文写作的时候注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如nothing but，thanks to，make some progress，get along well with, intend to，mean to，have a rest；运用which引导的定语从句。并注意了句子的衔接如：especially，because，and，after等等。